CDC Bookkeeping
hello@cdcbookkeeping.ca • Saskatoon
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Subject: Your hero is missing a next step
While reviewing CDC Bookkeeping's homepage, I noticed the hero section leads with "What our clients have to say..." as the first visible headline — leaving first-time visitors with no immediate statement of what you do or who you serve before being asked to book.
The "Book a Consultation" button also sits in the top-left in a small, low-contrast style with no supporting context nearby, which weakens the hero's ability to orient visitors quickly.
A simple first test: replace that opening headline with a single bold value statement like "Bookkeeping for Canadian Small Businesses."
If helpful, I can send the first above-the-fold change I'd test.
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"subject": "Your hero is missing a next step",
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